I finally got a chance to listen to this. Nicely done! I thought I'd heard all the various kinds of comments one could make on the failings of TATV, but there were a few new ones here for me.
I did like the one "positive" starter comment for the discussion and I agree with it. Had the series gone on, it would have been kind of neat to see a ENT/VOY episode and an ENT/TNG epsiode and a ENT/DS9 episode in the manner in which Brian(?) described - showing how events in ENT's era, and from these characters specifically, affected those other lives and characters. One per season, just stuck in the middle somewhere. It would have been a neat thing for a prequel series. But here, it was used in place of the finale and it didn't even work as the concept Brian described.
But mostly, I really liked the discussion focus of critique on the dramatic tension. It's true, there was nothing for the audience to really get into. Riker's personal quandary from some episode of TNG that I could hardly remember while I was watching this? Trip sacrificing himself so that Archer wouldn't be late to make a speech? (Oy.) Deanna gives away the moment early on so we know what's coming?
I loved your comment about "warp engines up on blocks". Yeah, that line about Trip never having gone to college really bugged me. REALLY bugged me. In a -"Seriously?? Is this what the writers think of an educated Southerner?"-kind of way. "You know you're a redneck engineer when..." LOL. Here's the thing: I suspect the line was included in an attempt to convey the idea that Trip was really smart - perhaps as a nod towards innovators and the many, many technical and programming geeks that are out there who never went to or finished college (or got a degree in something completed unrelated, like anthropology

) yet create complex technology - BUT, like a lot of what they intended in TATV, it just did
not come across that way.
I also agree with you that
Enterprise never got a proper finale. We tend to accept "Terra Prime" as such, but I liked your observation that it neatly wrapped up TnT, but not necessarily
Enterprise. I hadn't thought of it that way before, and it's probably why there are so many fanfics out there that actually do provide that kind of closure. A good finale would have wrapped up the lives of each of the characters, and had more to do with the stakes involved in forming the Federation, and their role in that.
The only thing I didn't agree with was the "it was too early in the time line" with regards to letting TnT have a different ending that what was implied in TATV. But maybe that's because of my anthro perspective: Sarek belonged to an elite class of his culture - one that was constantly in the public eye. He and Amanda would have been the first high profile xeno-couple, but certainly not the first couple. Working class people, especially folks in the military and orgs that cross cultures, are usually the first. But they rarely make the news and if they do, they don't stay there. They drop out of the public eye very quickly once whatever major event made them famous is done and gone. I see TnT as that working-class sort of early cross-cultural couple. I think Archer would have sustained the public eye, becoming an Admiral and Statesman, especially if he involved himself in politics. But the rest of the crew
could have easily dropped out of that public eye, intentionally or not, including TnT. B&B could have gone there, but they were too chicken to.
Great job! I wish we'd heard more from you!