Reviews For Heading Out
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Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2010 04:22 pm Title: Heading Out

Very nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Before leaving to go 'out there,' I'm sure there were a lot of such thoughts going through his mind.  Things didn't appear to be working to plan but ultimately, having T'Pol as his first officer turned out to be one of his greatest assets.

Reviewer: Hummingbird2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 03, 2010 07:36 am Title: Heading Out

*Sigh* Wonderful!



Author's Response:

Hummingbird2,

Thanks for your review.  I enjoy trying to get into the head of the character and I can see Jon feeling this way.  The greatest moment in his life and not at all sure that T'Pol wasn't going to end up being a nightmare crew member.  But at the same time wondering if she might just be the person he really needs.

asearcher

Reviewer: Lady Rainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2010 03:09 pm Title: Heading Out

Nice! Love Archer's voice in this and how he touches on his thoughts before Enterprise's launch. :-D



Author's Response:

Lady Rainbow:

Thanks for the review.  I know a lot of people do not prefer the free-style poetry style and I'm glad you liked it.  For me, the fact that he was about to fulfill his (and his father's dream) made that the primary focus.  I think that was in his mind when they launched.

BTW...I've posted my 'Broken Bow' video at the site.  The Alan Parson's song 'So Far Away' I felt captured the spirit of the pilot.  I don't know if you like vids, but if you do, it's there to check out.  If you watch it, be gentle with me...it's the only video I've been able to do so far and I'm sure my amatuer status shines through.

asearcher

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