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Reviewer: cai20160119 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 19, 2016 06:54 am Title: Lies for Breakfast

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Reviewer: tishkajaku Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2011 12:08 am Title: Lies for Breakfast

Hi again....please call me Tish, everyone does and it's easier to type! 

Yes, this is a well written POV for T'Pol, keeping in line with her deep Vulcan emotions and logical, to her, conclusion of bottling them up again to keep them both safe from being consumed and lost in the firestorm that she thinks is coming.

We know better, but she is still learning.

Thanks!



Author's Response:

Hi Tish! What a nice, poetic review. T'Pol is my favorite character to write, glad you thought it was in line with her Vulcan emotions. 

Reviewer: Reanok Signed [Report This]
Date: January 08, 2011 02:21 pm Title: Lies for Breakfast

Pnyasan I really liked how you prtrayed T'Pol's experiences during Harbinger. It was overpoering for her to have her emotions given free rein when she was with Trip and the Shower scene where she was trying to regain her emtional control she's afraid of her strong feelings for Trip and the fact she wanted to go his quarters and be with him that she was afraid of the loneliness she felt not being with him was a pretty powerful scene I can't wai to see what you have planned for second Part of your story Told from Trip's point od view.



Author's Response:

Thanks Reanok! I am glad you liked it and got a sense of all the emotions T'Pol was feeling.

Reviewer: Dinah Signed [Report This]
Date: December 23, 2010 09:40 pm Title: Lies for Breakfast

I'm really impressed by the way you filled in some of the gaping holes in "Harbinger."  I especially liked the way you handled the shower scene.  Usually it's depicted as a satisfying sexual experience for both Trip and T'Pol.  Your depiction of T'Pol pulling away from Trip makes perfect sense, given what we know about her and her fight to regain her emotional control; it also fits with the dream she'd have later in "Damage."

Your writing really has improved!  Congratulations on a job well done!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Dinah! It was such a nice surprise to find a review from you. Glad you liked the shower scene - I really wanted it to fit in with the dream she'd have later in Damage. Thanks also for the comment about my writing, it's very encouraging to hear.

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18, 2010 08:52 am Title: Lies for Breakfast

The title of this one grabbed my attention--it's absolutely perfect.

What a gorgeous, sad story. You did a great job filling in the gaps of "Harbinger." I also liked T'Pol's POV during her encounter with Trip; it had all the things you'd reasonably expect from a sexually inexperienced Vulcan without being forced and contrived.

Great work!



Author's Response:

Thanks Aquarius. The title is from a poem I wrote. I am glad you liked T'Pols POV so much. Thanks for the compliments.

Reviewer: Misplaced Signed [Report This]
Date: November 26, 2010 04:09 pm Title: Lies for Breakfast

Oh wow!  So beautifully written, and sad.  Very, very sad.  Well done!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Misplaced. Yeah, it became sadder then I had intented. Still thinking about the next chapters, I like to end with a hopefull note.

Reviewer: bluetiger Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 08:53 pm Title: Lies for Breakfast

I love this panyasan. Poor T'Pol feels as if there is no hope. When she regains her control maybe she will feel differently. You did a wonderful job with the shower scene. While it is sad, I will hold the hope of them getting together when she is better.

Author's Response:

Thanks Bluetiger. I was inspired by your kind review of another story of mine and by your great drawing of the shower scene. So I am happy you like it.

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