Date: May 19, 2011 07:36 am Title: Chapter 8
FFF WHY OH WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS END ON A SPOILER?
*late reveiw is late*
Author's Response:
Not a spoiler Linkin dear, the word you require is suspence. Trust me, it's a good little trick, it gets people to want to read more - sometimes.
Date: April 24, 2011 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 7
You better hurry up with the next chapter, the suspense is killing me xD
Author's Response:
Oh, I might just leave you hanging there, Linkin, just to amuse myself.
Date: March 30, 2011 08:48 am Title: Chapter 5
I have the feeling Cartio likes to make speeches. :-)
Reed's injury sounds a lot worse than it seemed. Ouch. Poor Malcolm.
Author's Response:
Cartio likes talking too.
I'm too cruel. xD
Date: March 05, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
Your story is very entertaining, Destinye! Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thank you c:
Date: March 03, 2011 12:25 am Title: Chapter 4
Finally got caught up on my reading this!
Not warp capable? Huh, I wonder what's up with that.
Poor Malcolm. Ouch. :-(
Author's Response:
I am very evil in the fact I like hurting characters. >:3
Date: February 24, 2011 08:08 am Title: Chapter 4
Not warp capabable! Well, that's a twist, isn't it? Keep the chapters coming, it keeps getting more interesting.
Author's Response:
Twists are fun.
Thank you. Chapter five is underway~
Date: December 18, 2010 03:46 am Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm very curious about these cat creatures.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I can say the cats will be involved later in the plotline.
Date: December 17, 2010 07:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for letting me beta-read this wonderful story. The planet you created is very vibrant and interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm hoping I can bring the planet more into the story.
Date: December 11, 2010 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to believe you're as new at this as you say you are. You've already mastered the art of the "hook"--something many writers never wrap their heads around, which is a shame because that's the most important part of the story. You've got my attention, and I'm eager to see how you hold it.
Nice work!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I've been writing 'stories' since I was about 5, so around 7/8 years. But not proper stories. I've been just writing a paragraph of something, then leaving it, and writing something 'chapter like' about once a year. But recently, as I've been roleplaying alot, I got inspired to go back and try writing again. My English Teacher seems to think I have alot of potential for writing - and it is a shame I didn't use it up until now. If that is the case, I guess it is the only thing I'm good at in english, xD
Date: November 24, 2010 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This beginning hooked me and I'm very interested to see what you have in store for the crew.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm planning alot of mystery and plot twists - I hope. If I can pull them off that is
Date: November 24, 2010 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1
An exciting start! Everyone seems in character, and I'm interested in seeing where you take this.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm hoping I'll manage to pull off some good plot twists.