Date: May 19, 2011 07:36 am Title: Chapter 8
FFF WHY OH WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS END ON A SPOILER?
*late reveiw is late*
Not a spoiler Linkin dear, the word you require is suspence. Trust me, it's a good little trick, it gets people to want to read more - sometimes.
Date: December 17, 2010 07:40 am Title: Chapter 2
Thank you for letting me beta-read this wonderful story. The planet you created is very vibrant and interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job!
Thank you. I'm hoping I can bring the planet more into the story.
Date: December 11, 2010 02:54 am Title: Chapter 1
It's hard to believe you're as new at this as you say you are. You've already mastered the art of the "hook"--something many writers never wrap their heads around, which is a shame because that's the most important part of the story. You've got my attention, and I'm eager to see how you hold it.
Thank you. I've been writing 'stories' since I was about 5, so around 7/8 years. But not proper stories. I've been just writing a paragraph of something, then leaving it, and writing something 'chapter like' about once a year. But recently, as I've been roleplaying alot, I got inspired to go back and try writing again. My English Teacher seems to think I have alot of potential for writing - and it is a shame I didn't use it up until now. If that is the case, I guess it is the only thing I'm good at in english, xD