Date: October 10, 2011 10:18 am Title: Promise
A "no" is sometimes what is best for us to hear, This is a good insight to the turmoil such a stance can be for one needing to deny a loved one, for their own good. Difficult, and well done!
Thank you, Tish!
I also wanted to show why Archer went to the dark side. He didn't want Trip to lose his soul.
And, you know me, I can see this developing into a full fledged story. However, I'm gonna tie that little plot bunny up until I have at least finished, or near finished, Never Forget...
Date: October 10, 2011 10:16 am Title: Intrepid
And again, you tell of a difficult time, writing the emotion so well, we can see it as if it is being played out on screen or in a play. Wow.
As for Trip's response, sometimes there are no words to 'fix' what is wrong, and a touch is all that is left.
I always felt the Jon was given a hard time by some people so I set out to show that the man is human, and what he did in the Expanse did affect him deeply. I'm glad I was able to portay that here.
Date: October 10, 2011 10:13 am Title: A Christmas Wish
This one always makes me sad....you describe Trip's unconcious demons and Jon's protective despair so well. Sometimes we cannot fix what makes our loved ones hurt, and that is one of life's hardest lessons. This is what you are able to convey so well in this drabble. Excellent!
This is one of my favorite Jon/Trip drabbles. I'm actually thinking of doing a sequel for Christmas this year. Maybe something with a bit more hope!?!
Date: February 15, 2011 10:24 am Title: Tower
Oh, this is just powerful and lovely. You've done a great job on all these drabbles. And I do adore Jon/Trip.
Aw! Thank you, Mistress Euclid!
I had written Tower a different way for the forum, but when I re-read it I thought that making the change to Trip's POV, that it might have a bit more of an impact. I'm glad it worked.
Oh, I also adore Jon and Trip :)
Date: December 18, 2010 12:41 pm Title: Cookout
*fans self* Dinner's not the only thing cooking, I see! XD
I didn't realise that I haven't answered your review, Aquarius! *blushes* sorry!
Anyhoo, thank you! :) I aim to please!
I should probably think about another chapter! *puts thinking cap on*
Date: December 03, 2010 08:59 pm Title: Cookout
loved the visual. It says everythin.
So, okay, scififan, I totally screwed my previous response up! I haven't uploaded Pizza yet, so you have no-idea what I'm talking about. That's ok, though, hopefully you will soon.
And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed With Pleasure as well!