Date: August 11, 2014 07:12 am Title: Chapter 1
This is great! The insights into these characters through their own thoughts at the beginning of the series is especially delightful knowing how they all come to work and respect each other later in the series. Their characterizations are spot on. Thank you for sharing this, and I wish you success in writing more of them.
Date: August 06, 2014 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this concept and am looking forward to seeing how you develop it. This first chapter is great. I think you captured all of the characters very well, but Hoshi in particular is a stand-out performance.