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Reviewer: Dinah Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02, 2014 02:57 pm Title: To The Degree That One Loves

What a lovely story! This was a real leap of faith for Trip. If T'Pol wasn't ready to commit to a relationship, it could have been disastrous. Instead, they've now established a strong foundation which will enable them to move forward together, regardless of the pressures of their differing cultures.

Your sentences flow beautifully, your descriptions are excellent and your characterizations are spot on. This story was a joy to read. Thank you!

 



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Reviewer: Brandyjane Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30, 2014 05:53 pm Title: To The Degree That One Loves

You had a great idea for a story and you executed it beautifully. Thanks for sharing it with us.



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