Date: August 02, 2014 02:57 pm Title: To The Degree That One Loves
What a lovely story! This was a real leap of faith for Trip. If T'Pol wasn't ready to commit to a relationship, it could have been disastrous. Instead, they've now established a strong foundation which will enable them to move forward together, regardless of the pressures of their differing cultures.
Your sentences flow beautifully, your descriptions are excellent and your characterizations are spot on. This story was a joy to read. Thank you!