Date: December 25, 2013 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1 The Logic of an Emotional Decision
I'm glad to have been of service! I'll have to share a few of my other ideas sometime. ;) These days I have no time to write anything except non-fiction for work. I had a lot of questions about those six missing hours, too, so I'm looking forward to how you address it. If it's anything like the first chapter, I know it will be great.
Please do share if you're in the mood to do so! Chapter 2 is up, but it may be a little wait for Chapter 3, as it has taken a while to really come together in my mind.
Date: December 24, 2013 03:03 am Title: Chapter 1 The Logic of an Emotional Decision
I LOVED this chapter, and I can't wait to read more! I could visualize the decon scene so well from your descriptions, and the insights into TnT's thoughts seemed exactly right to me. I like how you did show that there was a physical attraction there, but you didn't go overboard with it at this stage. I especially liked the very end where you had T'Pol come up with a logical reason to do what she wanted to do - help Trip - and I thought it was both amusing and accurate that her next thought would be, "How do I explain this to Soval?"
I'm so glad you enjoyed it, since it was your idea that inspired it, and I would hate do have done violance to it. Originally , this was just going to be a stand alone, but as I finished it, I realized there are still more questions to answer about that 6 hour gap in time.