Date: April 10, 2013 01:25 am Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE the picture you paint here of the Tucker family. Kiran is definitely a handful: Trip and T'Pol's curiosity and Vulcan strength. That's one volatile combination! But yet he has Trip's charm and winning personality. T'Pol's got her work cut out for her.
Your dialogue is really excellent. It sounds very natural and Trip and T'Pol are definitely in character. Well done!
I hope Trip gets the computer fixed and finds his logs and photos. Such a loss can be devastating. Mind meld may be great for Trip and T'Pol but they can't exactly send copies home to his folks.
You did a great job with this story!
Thanks for your review, Dinah. Your praise means a lot to me and I am glad you liked the story so much.