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Reviewer: Eireann Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2013 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hot, hot stuff from Hoshi and Malcolm!  Beautifully described, you draw the scene so well it's easy to picture it.

Reviewer: Reanok Signed [Report This]
Date: February 17, 2013 04:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great to see a romantic story with Malcolm and Hoshi.Nice Valentine story.I'm also glad you mentioned Trip&T'Pl also eenjoy shore leave on Risa,

Reviewer: bluetiger Signed [Report This]
Date: February 06, 2013 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, that was such a lovely interlude. How wonderful for them to fall into an easy sexual relationship with no angst.

Best vacation ever.

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2013 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1

Oh my! This is incredibly sexy and romantic. Finally, a male character from Trek has a pleasant trip to Risa, to boot. Very nice tip to history, too.

Reviewer: Artisticmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2013 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Very nicely done! And is it hot in here? I liked the verbal interplay between the two of them while dancing, it set up the next scene nicely. Then of course, the last scene was very well done.

Reviewer: Kathy Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04, 2013 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1

Very nice! I really enjoyed this.

It was also rather hot. *fans self* I would imagine this situation the same way, after they had worked together for so long, and all of a sudden they find themselves alone in a vacation spot with none of the pressure of duty. The way you wrote it made it seem very natural.

My favorite line: She sighed, content, feeling very much like a sated cat lounging in a warm pool of sunlight. That conveys so much in one sentence.

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