Date: February 04, 2013 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice! I really enjoyed this.
It was also rather hot. *fans self* I would imagine this situation the same way, after they had worked together for so long, and all of a sudden they find themselves alone in a vacation spot with none of the pressure of duty. The way you wrote it made it seem very natural.
My favorite line: She sighed, content, feeling very much like a sated cat lounging in a warm pool of sunlight. That conveys so much in one sentence.