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Reviewer: Brandyjane Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22, 2013 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this! We need more early stories like this one. I always felt that Jon's decision to ask T'Pol to stay aboard and T'Pol's acceptance were a little abrupt. A nice, quiet interlude like the one you presented here would make that transition make a lot more sense. I really like how you have T'Pol and Jon finding that common ground so early on.

Reviewer: Mistress Euclid Signed [Report This]
Date: January 17, 2013 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

Absolutely lovely story! I very much enjoyed it. 

Reviewer: Kathy Rose Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15, 2013 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story! I loved this look at T'Pol's thought process during her first days on Enterprise, as well as her curiosity about humans when she learns that some of them meditate, and some of the things she had been taught about humans might be in error.

I found this very easy to read, and very much in T'Pol's voice. Great job!

Reviewer: Hummingbird2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was very intriguing, and I liked the fact that, even this early in the series, T'Pol had to challenge her preconceived notions about humans.

Thank you very much!

Author's Response:

Very "intriguing," huh?  Do I hear a pun?  But thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Artisticmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2013 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

Nicely done! That was an enjoyable read and I can competely see that being a lost moment in season one.

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2013 03:30 am Title: Chapter 1

What a nice piece of back story! Great use of the prompt, too. It's always fun to go back to those earlier episodes where everyone was new to each other. Great job!

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11, 2013 02:57 am Title: Chapter 1

Very lovely little scene here. Just low key and very much in T'Pol's head. Good job!

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