Date: January 22, 2013 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like this! We need more early stories like this one. I always felt that Jon's decision to ask T'Pol to stay aboard and T'Pol's acceptance were a little abrupt. A nice, quiet interlude like the one you presented here would make that transition make a lot more sense. I really like how you have T'Pol and Jon finding that common ground so early on.
Date: January 15, 2013 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excellent story! I loved this look at T'Pol's thought process during her first days on Enterprise, as well as her curiosity about humans when she learns that some of them meditate, and some of the things she had been taught about humans might be in error.
I found this very easy to read, and very much in T'Pol's voice. Great job!
Date: January 11, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very intriguing, and I liked the fact that, even this early in the series, T'Pol had to challenge her preconceived notions about humans.
Thank you very much!
Very "intriguing," huh? Do I hear a pun? But thank you for the review!