Date: January 28, 2014 05:45 am Title: Chapter 1
My heart! What have you done with it?
All dramatics aside, this story is incredibly intense. Full of clear emotion on both sides. It feels almost like your there with them. A shinning example of great fanfiction not requiring sex or even remotely sexual stuff being included except for the odd joke. I especially inejoyed the last scene.
Date: October 25, 2012 10:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! That last scene was intense.
A very bittersweet and believable story. Neither one wants the other one to suffer, yet don't realize they're hurting each other. Jon's reasoning that he needs to stay focused and can't do that when Trip is near, given that he cares so much for him, is perfectly understandable. I normally don't care for stories that have a lot of angst, but I liked this one, because Jon and Trip took steps to open up about what was keeping them apart.
I also like the imagy this line evokes: Our angry breaths hang in the air like a millstone waiting to fall as our standoff continues.
Thank you, Kathy Rose! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I don't like overdoing the angst, but sometimes it's needed. I think it brings out how hurt/angry/loss etc... Season 3 is a fanfiction writers dream. There was so much left unsaid, so much left undone, so I've been dallying with a follow-up to this, but that won't happen till I catch up with other stories. :)
Date: October 24, 2012 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was absolutely beautiful and brought me to tears. You did an amazing job at capturing all that the Expanse put Jon through, and the damage it did to his and Trip's relationship. Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
Awww... Thank you, Kylah! I'm so glad that this story hit the spot! Ya've left me a bit speechless with your feedback. I so appreciate it!