Date: September 12, 2012 08:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
XD XD XD The linguist in me thanks you for this story!
Gives a new meaning to the 'yo mamma wears combat boots...' joke
I am glad you enjoyed this so much! I giggle every time I reread the story - and I know the joke!
Date: September 02, 2012 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
How funny! I really like stories like this, where the crew gets to relax and not deal with work. The dialogue sounds natural, and it's clear that the crew members are enjoying what they're doing -- except for Malcolm losing!
It was a pleasant change to write something that wasn't shippy, I'll have to look for more opportunities to do that. It was nice to have an opportunity for the crew to be having fun and not be in a dangerous situation. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: August 18, 2012 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bwa ha ha! That was hilarious, thank you.
Y'know, Archer seemed to be in 'Dad Mode' ;). I guess somebody has to keep them in line (well, for the most part, anyway).
Yes, someone does need to be the dad sometimes. I am glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: August 17, 2012 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
That's really funny! I never get tired of friendship stories that just show the characters hanging out. Everyone was really believable. I especially liked it when Hoshi teases about not being as angelic as she looks.
For some reason, even though it's a bit of a tongue twister, I really liked this : she pondered the plethora of derogative phrases
LOL! I enjoyed that line too, and there was no way I was having anyone actually say that. But knowing Hoshi, she probably thinks using words like that. Thanks for reviewing.