Reviews For After Rain
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Reviewer: Mistress Euclid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 16, 2012 01:40 pm Title: After Rain

This story is a lot of fun! I enjoy your portrayal of the characters.

Reviewer: Mareel Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2012 09:10 am Title: After Rain

I love reading (and rereading) this. You can feel Malcolm relaxing as it progresses - from that startled awake "Am I needed on the bridge?" to his sleepy "G'night."

I also really like the way Jon engages all of his other senses as they lie together in the darkness.

And the ending - lovely thoughts.  Thank you for this!

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2012 02:20 am Title: After Rain

Wow! Great last line, especially. Very nice work. 

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