Reviews For Afternoon Delight
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Reviewer: Jamieson Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2013 07:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Teehee!!  That ending was fantastic...as was the rest of the story. Excellent.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bluetiger Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2012 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh no, this makes me so sad. I was so in to what was going on and sharing in Trip's joy of having T'Pol all to himself!

To continue this later will be pointless since the kids will be in the house as usual.

You did a wonderful job pulling me into his excitement and the sex was fantastic.

The interuption was painful for me, I can only imagine how it was for Trip.

I has a sad.

 



Author's Response:

Sorry to harsh on your mellow, BT! LOL :-p

This was a response for one of the smut workshop exercises, and the object was to capture the challenges/obstacles/circumstances common to sex for people who've been married for a while. The imperfection of the moment (or its ruin, LOL) is, I think, a richer opportunity for character development than static perfection. A few things I didn't anticipate came out when I wrote this --- Trip and T'Pol's differing philosophies on the effect of sex on children even after so many years of marriage, for example. Or Trip stepping up to the plate to use this as a teaching moment for his daughter, versus just grounding her for ditching school -- a "Trip is a good dad" fic, if you will.

Less titillation. :-( But more finding out who these people are. :-)

I thank you for the read and for the feedback. Next time I promise not to be so mean to my readers LOL. :-p

Reviewer: panyasan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2012 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

You haven't lost your touch, dear. This was funny, sexy and with Trip's unique voice.



Author's Response:

Thanks, panyasan! :) Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2012 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Sexy. Embaressing. Hilarious. And BEST LAST LINE EVER.



Author's Response:

LOL thanks! And thanks for your beta reading kung fu.

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