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Date: March 24, 2013 05:04 am Title: Prologue
You know, as I was coming to the end of this wonderful story I was thinking that I was gonna beg ya for a sequel! Seeing how this has ended, I'm gonna hope that's exactly what you're gonna do! :)
Thank you, Kayla, for such an excellent tale! I'm glad Trip sorted through everything, and that just maybe a hint of Hoshi/Malcolm??? :)
Date: August 28, 2012 04:33 am Title: Chapter 10
Okay, this little lady has butterflies going on!
A conclusion on my thoughts, so far.
Kylah! This is such an intriguing story. With each chapter you've been enticing me in more and more. I love you OC (so, no worries there), you have nailed the voices of each of the crew, and you've thrown in a mystery that could end up killing our favorite engineer! Well done! I soooo look forward to reading the rest of this wonderful story!
Date: August 28, 2012 04:27 am Title: Chapter 8
And... the plot thickens. Good on Hoshi for seeing the connections, she has an ear for these things! :) And, Callie, daydreaming in the middle of a meeting. Hmm... I wouldn't mind seeing the rest of that! :) Jon's hurt with the loss of Trip's presence makes me :(
Date: August 28, 2012 04:19 am Title: Chapter 6
Another wonderful interaction moment with Callie, she really is part of the crew.
You know, if hadn't occurred to me that Trip would be fearful of sickbay after Elizabeth died, makes sense!
Again, a lovely chapter.
Date: August 28, 2012 04:16 am Title: Chapter 5
"It's blue!" Tehehehe...
I loved the dinner scene and getting a glimps of what Danobula would look like. Phlox's wives are a hoot, aren't they!? :)
I can relate to Callie in her awe at being in space, I'd be the same way. Oh, Jon me boy, watch where you step. And...
ROSTOV! I love Rostov! So glad you wrote him into your story! But, um... Pleeeeeease don't kill him! :(
Date: August 28, 2012 04:13 am Title: Chapter 4
I always thought T'Pol would suffer in silence! I am sad for her, but angry at the same time that she would want to stir feelings again in Trip when she knows he's hurt and confused - very good writing to bring that across.
Man, did I have a good laugh with Travis - onya Jon for lightening the mood up a bit, and yes, you should always listen to your armory officer!
Creepy ship is creepy...
Date: August 28, 2012 04:05 am Title: Chapter 3
This chapter is so full of gems, where do I start!?
Yay for Travis and Hoshi! Malcolm's giddiness over his new toys! Trip trying to avoid Callie (clever man, that). Jon's deep concern for his friend!
Again, excellent building up of this story.
Date: August 28, 2012 04:00 am Title: Chapter 2
*sniff* I soooo wanted to cry for Mrs Tucker! I loved that whole scene. And I love the interaction between Hoshi and Callie. I can see this being a beautiful friendship.
It was a lovely surprise to have another POV about Trip's sister, and getting a glimpse of what his life could have been like growing up. Well done, Kylah!
Date: August 28, 2012 03:55 am Title: Chapter 1
I'll own up and say that I've read through this whole, beautifuly written, story. Now I'm going to try and remember what my thoughts were to let you know just how much I'm enjoying this.
Firstly, Callie is such a natural addition to the crew, I'm enjoying her character extremely. Poor Torp! So angry that he can't see people are trying to help despite his nose.
Date: June 30, 2012 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 10
There certainly is a lot in this chapter. Your descriptions and dialogue are excellent. You also have a very complex story going here, two separate scenarios that you're just now beginning to bring together. Very well done! Im looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: March 18, 2012 01:20 am Title: Chapter 8
Ooh! Now we're cookin'. *rubs hands excitedly* Seriously, despite enjoying your writing I was wondering when this fic was going to get moving. Now I see that it is and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thanks!
Oh yes. We're moving, and moving fast now. Bahahahahaha!
Date: March 12, 2012 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
WOW. Nicely done. The scene with Callie and T'Pol had lots of nice tension. I really can't wait to see more of this. Write faster!
Thank you! I can't really see T'Pol and Callie ever becoming friends, but perhaps coming to a mutual respect. Who knows?
Date: March 12, 2012 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
More tears! The scene with Trip and the little girl was just wonderful. Great story. I am intrigued to see what happened with the mystery ship.
Thank you! The scene with Trip and the girl made me teary when I wrote it, too. :)
Date: March 12, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
YAY! Hoshi has a friend! The scene between Callie and Catherine was very sweet.
I sort of always felt like Hoshi-always surrounded by all that testosterone-needed a girlfriend to confide in. This just fit.
Date: March 12, 2012 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dang! You brought tears to my eyes a few times. The second chapter is as good as the first. I will enjoy seeing how Callie fits in with the rest of the crew.
Aww, thank you! Glad you're enjoying it!
Date: March 12, 2012 03:34 pm Title: Prologue
Ooh! How exciting! I rarely read fanfic that isn't ship based but I am very intrigued with where this is going! Your OC should be an interesting addition to the cast of characters.
Thanks! Glad you like her.
Date: February 18, 2012 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 5
Your view of life on Denobula was very interesting. Trip's interaction with Anaya was lovely and yet very sad.
It's too bad things had to go from such a pleasant visit to a tragedy. The alien ship really is a mystery -- and apparently lethal. I'm glad Rostov survived.
I couldn't kill off Rostov. I loved him in Vox Sola.
Glad you're enjoying! Thanks for the sweet review!