Date: December 30, 2011 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting idea - tying Raijin in with the Romulans. I always wondered why Raijin went to scan T'Pol. As presented on the show, her interest should have been focused exclusively on the Humans. This is certainly a perfectly reasonable explanation.
You did a nice job of showing how T'Pol was affected by Raijin's assault. I'm certainly glad that Trip was around to help her through the worst of it.
I'm wondering, though, if Raijin isn't in a far more difficult position than she realilzes. The Xindi can't hold a candle to the Romulans when it comes to ruthlessness. Very well done!
Thanks for the review, Dinah. I was also glad that Trip was around to help T'Pol through this horrible experience. And yes, I also did wonder why Raijin did scan T''Pol while her main focus was on Humans.
Date: December 09, 2011 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Very intriguing start, panyasan! I really like the way that you have put the thoughts behind the actions here.
Looking forward to chapter 2!
Hmm... now I wanna go watch Rajiin...
Thank you so much, Paulinem! I always felt there was more to Raijin that meets the eye.