Reviews For Rip Tide
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: wty123 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 30, 2016 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

along tommy hilfiger outlet stores the michael kors v?skor road, burberry bags outlet in houston rockets the wedding dresses sun ray ban zonnebril overflowing nike shoes outlet Xuan cheap oakley window, timberland outlet Zen longchamp taschen write oakley prescription sentences, jordan shoes then nike roshe the heart nfl saints will burberry Bodhi nike air force ease. abercrombie fitch Between clothing websites the nike air max 2015 time cheap basketball shoes of nop jerseys looking ray ban sunglasses up, how juicy couture many coach handbags outlet things, such nike air max as adidas superstar clean long champ water oakley sunglasses droplets philipp plein clothes can rock uggs like longchamp perfectly bottega veneta clear? minnesota timberwolves How guess jeans many toms shoes stories kanye west shoes can roshe run write coach outlet online the cheap jerseys perfect abercrombie ending? calvin klein There nfl giants is givenchy bags always nike air docked true religion outlet boat, adidas shoes there abercrombie and fitch are nfl browns always michael kors outlet online stranded michael kors outlet online on michael kors outlet the prada handbags beach, portland trail blazers there toms shoes outlet is giuseppe zanotti always michael kors handbags a lacoste polos winding ray ban sunglasses outlet road, michael kors bags there kate spade are bcbg max azria jagged cheap eyeglasses mountain designer handbags life, roche run bearing oakley outlet in zapatillas nike mind soccer shoes the ugg australia most nike huaraches beautiful, gafas oakley always adidas sneakers from timberland boots the true religion jeans women hundred lululemon thousand ralph lauren turn ralph lauren shirts back mcm bags room.The mellow chanel sunglasses years, vans shoes placed uggs outlet in lunette oakley pas cher a bottega rustic rayban heart, oakley with shoes on sale soft sac jerseys eyes, michael kors australia watching converse shoes clouds tommy hilfiger blossoming, michael kors see puma outlet store Castle hogan rain, uggs to swarovski australia see coach outlet thousands ugg of pandora rings blue prada sea, uggs watching nfl raiders the michael kors purses sunset michael kors afterglow hilfiger hang tory burch sale around ferragamo shoes with knicks jerseys elegant coach purses heart, nfl jaguars feeling nba jerseys the scarpe hogan Qing nike free 5.0 Ning burberry sale Chen, ray ban sunglasses night michael kors bags of nfl steelers quiet ray bans beauty, supra men shoes the uggs fragrance babyliss of beats audio flowers, ray ban the nfl buccaneers month north face jackets intoxicated, longchamp outlet will coach outlet store describe barbour mens jackets in free run the nfl jerseys Red coach factory outlet online Amidst los angeles clippers a polo ralph smile nike air max at nfl lions people, and mcm handbags vegetation ray ban outlet can mizuno running shoes be katespade outlet peace barbour women jackets and nike free shoes quiet, polo ralph lauren outlet the heart, hollister online shop deutschland can ralph lauren uk be burberry outlet as the north face outlet indifferent north face backpacks to watches the armani exchange clothing quiet chanel beauty ugg australia of christian louboutin the oakley leaves.Often nba jerseys thank ralph lauren outlet fate, hermes outlet I jerseys from china can iphone 4s cases grant wedding dresses one rayban empty long champ eyes, louboutin a ray ban sunglasses landscape, moncler women jackets as louboutin outlet well ralph lauren as adidas shoes outlet joy cheap jerseys and pandora jewellery the jimmy choo night pandora cold, ralph lauren uk do air max 2015 not swarovski live relojes especiales in ray-ban sunglasses a mont blanc pens beautiful burberry flowing air max 90 hearts, timberland homme so air max 95 that nfl seahawks time jordans for sale ivy, nike huarache covered swarovski crystal with mbt shoes outlet the nfl bills color dsquared2 shoes of bos jersey love, cheap oakley both coach factory outlet online in hollister kids the kate spade outlet corner mcm handbags is coach outlet sale barren, nfl falcons and hermes bags as coach outlet close pandora to asics the ed hardy clothing sun, milwaukee bucks at ugg australia the replica handbags season coco chanel calmly ray ban sunglasses removed, suns jerseys the hollister clothing store inter-smile roshe run in burberry online shop blossom, softball bats in nfl bears the tommy hilfiger online shop well-being rolex interwoven michael kors handbags years, cleveland cavaliers jerseys learn longchamp outlet to polo outlet online treat and coach factory outlet online cherish.Some ray ban wayfarer stranded prada outlet total uhren memory, christian louboutin shoes walking ralph lauren outlet online in mcm outlet the replica watches sad northface years true religion or nets jersey bright, coach factory outlet online like nike mercurial vapor a marc jacobs handbags thin uggs outlet first abercrombie word toronto raptors from the salvatore ferragamo rich ray ban Yin nfl vikings to bcbg dresses light, cheap glasses and converse outlet then michael kors outlet online in thomas sabo the burberry outlet online Yudabajiao denver nuggets night, jerseys from china buried swarovski jewelry or nba jerseys covered polo ralph lauren with nike outlet store dust, dre beats those air jordan shoes brief huaraches reunion, michael kors bags tangled air max in oakley sunglasses outlet the coach bags palm nfl texans fate, cheap oakley sunglasses destined nfl 49ers to oakley sunglasses be nike outlet a salomon schuhe never coach outlet ending michael kors canada Zen wedding dresses uk way. moncler outlet online The rolex replica ring tommy hilfiger was air jordan removed, baseball jerseys there prada outlet will north face pas cher always burberry uk take hilfiger outlet you hair straightener out burberry handbags of nfl packers the kate spade outlet online Ivy toms outlet League kevin durant shoeskobe bryant shoes in nfl eagles the p90x workout schedule past, designer handbags when mcm bags the versace shoes outlet red-lacquered wedding dresses uk doors the north face open, polo ralph lauren outlet write san antonio spurs full michael kors outlet online sale Jian nfl broncos Qing nfl rams Ning, nfl chargers and oakley gentle cheap true religion warmth.This celine handbags world nike air of emotions, adidas neo ups ralph lauren factory store too, mac cosmetics will jimmy choo shoes eventually ralph lauren be coach purses let burberry outlet online down. nike tn requin Only ferragamo those michael kors who uggs do kobe bryant jersey not air max 2014 are oakley outlet online not oakley sunglasses cheap concentrated orlando magic strong roshes affection, lunette ray ban pas cher life air max 90 is cheap true religion still asics gel a new balance shoes long cheap ray ban road, thomas sabo uk swaying air max beauty, supra footwear such reebok as washington wizards the swarovski cup north face of memphis grizzlies water, cheap jerseys although puma plain marc jacobs outlet dull, mcm backpack outlet but vans schuhe timely new balance and nfl chiefs peaceful, true religion jeans outlet is the north face written cheap jerseys on insanity calendar the abercrombie white coach factory outlet online hair chicago bulls moonlight hermes birkin Qiannian nike air max will gooses be burberry outlet online with timberland shoes the nfl patriots dye utah jazz cream nfl jets of michael kors time, burberry handbags more michael kors bags and air max shoes more replica watches profound, ray ban wayfarer it fake rolex is tory burch sandals worth longchamp your barbour outlet life coach factory online to michael kors outlet online sale gentle ray ban treatment.Line ralph lauren polo in toms outlet the omega watches earth, ugg boots the charlotte hornets jersey end hollister is beats by dre not nfl titans off cheap nike shoes the pandora bracelets joys north face outlet and louboutin sorrows. gsw jerseys If beats by dre the replica watches use ralph lauren online of longchamp handbags clean ugg heart, cheap michael kors come louboutins sorrow, vans outlet and cheap oakley sunglasses quiet, michael kors outlet let free running me swarovski removed jordan release dates fleeting nfl bengals flowers, michael kors bags trees, cheap oakley sunglasses seed oakley sunglasses outlet time, oakley sunglasses so giuseppe shoes I nike free run can air jordans read canada gooses outlet after dallas mavericks jersey thousands michael kors purses of prada sunglasses landscape, hugo boss outlet still tory burch shoes do celine handbags most polo ralph lauren outlet online true chanel purses of red bottoms their nfl redskins own, the north face such barbour women jackets as ralph lauren a nike huaraches bloom, nfl panthers during montre pas cher the flat iron flow nike roshe of instyler ionic styler sunlight burberry handbags and philadelphia 76ers jersey shade, tory burch shoes clear jerseys from china light baseball bats and new balance dark converse chucks shades abercrombie and fitch kids of nike outlet life, toms shoes if after new balance store the russell westbrook jersey tide, wholesale handbags sweetheart, nfl dolphins do nike outlet not mia jersey fall the north face outlet cloud michael kors of beats audio dust polo ralph lauren traces.Way adidas of pistons jersey life, burberry handbags no nfl colts matter pandora what air jordan retro kind chi hair of nike store frustration nike free shoes and fendi outlet online hesitation, michael kors outlet online just feel nike air max 2014 a toms outlet sea, occhiali oakley will nike mercurial be nfl azcardinals

converse michael kors outlet replica rolex nfl ravens ralph lauren outlet polo ralph lauren michael kors bags levis outlet store ray ban outlet hollister co nfl cowboys michael kors handbags vibram shoes coach bags indiana pacers coach factory outlet new balance nike online coach outlet online ugg boots clearance juicy couture clothings valentino shoes outlet toms outlet barbour mens jackets rayban sunglasses

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: December 19, 2011 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 1

Wow, no wonder Malcolm joined Starfleet instead of the navy! Great addition to Drown Malcolm Month.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  That's what I thought!  Glad you enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: kayjayuu Signed [Report This]
Date: December 09, 2011 02:42 am Title: Chapter 1

Very much enjoyed the backstory, good use of what we know of Malcolm's history! I could hear the little British boy in a lot of his voice.

Nice job. 

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  Going back into Malcolm's childhood for this seemed to be the key to me and I tried to be true to the voice  Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: EntAllat Signed [Report This]
Date: December 07, 2011 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love the richness of the extra characters here. Uncle Archie and especially Madeline, obviously hitting her teenage years. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you appreciated the story.

I just had the muse whisper in my ear about how this situation occured and Malcolm's family in general.  I'm glad the canon (but not well mined) characters came across well.

Reviewer: Mr Smith Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05, 2011 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I thought this was a very interesting take on where Malcolm's aquaphobia could have come from and how it informed his life pre-Starfleet. I particularly loved the insight into how he relates with his family, especially the secret-keeping with his mother, that was a lovely touch, and the comparison and contrast between Malcolm's personality and that of his father in the way they react to things. I thought it was very natural to the way we glimpsed his parents onscreen.

I also thought you did a good job writing about Britain and British people from an American perspective, the use of Cornwall in particular made me smile as it's always a popular holiday spot and reminds me of my own childhood. But there was one moment that pulled me out of the story a little, when Stuart admonished Malcolm for using the word hell (I believe that's what he was admonishing). That struck me as very American, a British parent wouldn't take such offense because hell isn't a curse word over here at all. Otherwise, you did a great job of making them sound British without exaggerating.

Anyway, I'm glad I managed to grab the time to read this. Lovely work.

Reviewer: Mareel Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02, 2011 01:05 am Title: Chapter 1

This is a wonderful glimpse into a very believeable triggering point for Malcolm’s aquaphobia – and into his (and his parents') reactions to it.

It’s interesting (and telling, I think, about his relationship with his father) that he seems much more open, and even demonstrative, with his Uncle Archie than he is with his father. That seems very much Malcolm to me, in that we do see him in canon as opening up on several occasions to people he trusts.

That he seems to be able to confide in his mother and trusts her to keep his secret is also a lovely glimpse into his psyche and again, is very consistent with the Malcolm we see serving on Enterprise. I get the idea that this might not be the first secret kept between Malcolm and his mum – which makes a lot of sense to me, maybe it's a result of both Stuart’s rigid attitudes and his probable absence on duty for significant portions of Malcolm’s childhood.

He obviously cares about his father’s opinion of him, but not to the extent that it prevents him from choosing his own path – both at the fishing boat and in his career choice. They are both stubborn men.

I loved Malcolm’s comparison of his father to the riptide. Very astute. There is a lot of depth to Malcolm, even as a child, and I do think he has thought a lot about this.

Thanks so much for sharing this!

Author's Response:

And thank you for the beta. You were spot on in all suggestions.

I liked pulling Malcolm's family out to play with. We saw a few glimpses and mostly heard stories in the show.  It was nice to work with them.

Thanks again for the beta and review.  I'm glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: panyasan Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2011 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

It was an interesting look in the childhood of Malcolm and a good explanation of his fear for water. I thought the picture of Malcolm's father - strict with difficulty to see behind his own view - was well done.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Phobias are interesting.  You know LOGICALLY that you shouldn't have them but they are not logical.  They are emotionally created and there is truly an physical response that presents a roadblock to getting past them.  As to Stuart Reed, the little view we had of him in Silent Enemy as well as Reed's occasional view of him spoke to him being that kind of person.

Reviewer: Hummingbird2 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01, 2011 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was incredible! Beautifully done, thank you.

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I've heard about Drown Malcolm month almost since I started fanfic writing in 2005 but hadn't attempted one until now. Deciding to go back to the source seemed like a good place to start. And now you know where peanut butter on pancakes came from. ;^).

You must login (register) to review.