Date: November 15, 2011 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
LOL, that is going to be a surprise for the crewman at the transporter pad! you have a wonderful way of describing your enviornment, lush, colorful, sensual..this is one of your gifts as an author. That is one island and lake I would like to visit, sans the arachnid!
Yes, I would like to visit the island as well. I had such a clear picture in my mind of that place, so I am glad the descriptions worked out well. Thanks for your review tishkajaku.
Date: November 13, 2011 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice story, panyasan. And I totally didn't expect the ending! I don't think I would want to be in the transporter room at that moment.
Thanks, Kathy Rose. I am glad you're surprised by the ending.