Date: May 21, 2012 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
I envy your knack for hooking a reader with a mystery. Already wondering what's up with Arkava and what these above-board people are hiding.
Oh, and this line was full of win:
“Why would we flee with the Vulcans' profits?”
Very well-delivered! Can't wait to get to the next chapter -- as soon as I get a sec.
Date: October 15, 2011 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is suspensful, fast paced, and unique in the new world with all the intrugue of codes, spies, underground, sabatoge! All the characters are well described, so we do not get mixed up with our RU crew, and I want to get to know them even better.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Yeah, the E Crew has stumbled over one heck of a problem in this First Contact!
Sometimes First Contacts don't turn out as well as you hope. But our crew is persistent nevertheless.