Date: September 13, 2011 12:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, nice! I really like what you've done with the contrasting attitudes of Archer and Kolos: Archer refusing to give in to the darkness, and Kolos seeing that there may be light.
It's interesting, too, that a human is defying what Rura Penthe is supposed to be. Klingons are the one who aren't supposed to give up, and yet that is what Kolos appeared to have done, until the rescue.
Thank you so much! I love it when a reviewer points up something that I hadn't really thought explicitly about when I was writing.
I've always really liked Kolos and wished they had managed to follow-up on his situation later in the series. I see Jonathan and Kolos in much the same light of potential friendship as I see with Degra. We saw Jonathan's friendship with Shran developed further, but it really seems as though he builds strong rapport with those who might well have been his enemies.