Date: August 10, 2011 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I simply loved this, Artisticmom. Hoshi listing the merits of the men folk and logically listing the pro's and con's is so sweet and funny.I am proud of her for dipping her toes in both waters!
I always thought Hoshi was so much more then what the writers did with her. And quite honestly, the lists of pro's and con's is something straight out of my own life. It's good to take the emotion out of something on occassion and look at it like a Vulcan!
Date: August 05, 2011 04:10 am Title: Chapter 1
This sounds like something Hoshi would do...
I have to admit I liked these:
TRIP: UNAVAILABLE and TRAVIS: TOO MUCH LIKE MY BROTHER...
XD Yeah, I can see the problem w/Travis, but he IS such a cutie.
I'd like to see a sequel with Hoshi putting her plan to action!
I am glad that you enjoyed the story. A list is very much a Hoshi thing - with her analytical mind. Travis is such a cutie but he is just so much the younger brother type.
As far as a sequel... that does put me in mind of a few different ways this story could go... hmmm... thanks for the suggestion!
Date: August 05, 2011 02:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Choose Jon, Hoshi! :) After reading such a great stories about Archer and Hoshi I think it can really work. Nice story. I smiled when I read the name Hiro for Hoshi's younger brother, because I just sent you a list with Japanese names. ;) Great work AM2.
Thanks Panyasan! Then I have succeed in my mission of another A/S convert!
I have your list printed and sitting with my thumb drive so I can reference it when I need a new name... but I will confess to pulling that name from the tv show "Heros". The character of Hiro on that show made a great little brother in my mind.
Date: August 04, 2011 07:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome! Just a pleasure to read. Hoshi seems pretty astute here as well.
Thank you! Hoshi would have to be pretty sharp to be a polyglot like she is! She's just turned that formidable brain power to a different sort of problem!