Date: October 15, 2011 11:25 am Title: Chapter 7
Excellent solution....as well all know, T'Pol is a genius on chemistry, even at Vulcan standards, so no surprise she and Phlox, another medical genius, were able to concoct an antivirus/innoculation to use.
Funny vignettes for the shenanigans of the crew!
Date: October 15, 2011 11:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Whew, I am grateful to know this was not a planet wides conspiracy, so it seem, however have been suspecting a potential plot in play here.
The bit about it not disappaiting soon is troubling. Hope Malcolm is being well taken care of by Hoshi.
This TnT shipper LOVES that scene! And the fact the two of them are in each other's minds solving the mystery.
Date: October 15, 2011 11:03 am Title: Chapter 5
What an exquisite way to describe the bond...
Time ceased to tick and began to flow. And Trip Tucker was lost within it.
One of your gifts is to write in a way to where we are immersed in the story with our crew, as if we have our own blue jumpsuit with an Enterprise patch on the sleeve and are part of the action. WOW!
Date: October 15, 2011 10:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Boomer promise...great idea!
I am glad T'Pol, Phlox and Trip are on to the chemical studies, but wish they would tell Archer, since he had info from Malcolm and Phlox as well.
And this is not a good time for SP1 tampering, Travis, not with everyone all wonky!
Glad Hoshi and Malcolm have some resolution done!
Date: October 15, 2011 10:06 am Title: Chapter 2
The foodie in me loves those descriptions. I have always thought NX-01 had the best chef of all the fleet, and our crew was the best fed....and seeing it on screen was a treat!
I caught the concern from Trip about T'Pol not feeling well....even after the teasing. Intriguing!
Ah Hoshi, the best laid plans go awry. looking forward to the next chater.
Date: October 15, 2011 09:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I do love chocolate, and would be lost in that bakery. Not sure that will be suach a good thing here, since i like to keep my senses about me when in strange places!
Love the descriptions of the sights, sounds and smells...this is going to be a very organic experience, your story!
Date: September 30, 2011 12:48 am Title: Chapter 6
While I enjoy the mystery of just what's in that chocolate to make everyone act a little crazy, my favorite part of this chapter (predictably) was the TnT scene.
T'Pol drowsed in the cooler warmth of Trip's arms. He murmured to himself and pulled her closer. She allowed herself the faintest of smiles, in this most private of moments. Why had she been afraid of this for so long? What was the quote from the Earth religious text? Pride goeth before a fall. Yes, she fell, and fell hard.
Trip had been there to catch her, and would always be.
*gets all melty*
Date: August 07, 2011 04:38 am Title: Chapter 3
At first I thought, how insidious--a high calorie treat that tastes just like your favorite sweet! It's like what would happen if Macinac Island fudge and crack had a baby.
But there's something even worse than addictive calories going on here. I can't yet tell if it's a drug-like quality like my initial assessment, or mind control, or maybe some of both.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: August 06, 2011 06:59 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Wow. Wow. If ever you write profic, set it in Italy or an Italy-like planet! You've got a knack for writing lush descriptions. I love the playfulness between Malcolm and Trip here, as well as the food descriptions. Bravissimo!