Date: September 01, 2011 11:30 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't think I've commented on this elsewhere -- I love how it's put together, and how the alien characters sound alien. Obviously they're not going to have the same thought processes as humans do.
I had fun to write the thought process of the Orions very different then ours. I was challenged to write a fic with humour and when I found myself smiling all the way writing this, I knew it was going to work. ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: July 23, 2011 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
This couldn't have been more perfect. I loved the sneaky Orions. Trip and T'Pol really were their worst nightmares come true. The Orions may put everything down to an anomaly, but there will always be that little kernel of doubt it the back of their minds.
The discussion of kissing and bacteria was very well done. Someday T'Pol may catch on to the fact that talk of bacteria doesn't exactly fill a man with thoughts of romance.
Thanks, Dinah. Yes, the Orions always will have some doubt lingering in the back of their mind. I had fun writing about ENT from the unique POV of the Orions.