Date: August 14, 2012 01:57 pm Title: "Pickles"
Cute! I'm glad you added the last four words. They make me wonder what's coming next.
Yeah, I just couldn't cut it down any more. I'm so sorry I didn't see this review until just now, but thank you!
Date: August 14, 2012 12:57 pm Title: "Pickles"
That was cool, if a bit gross (in a fun way), thanks!
Hah! Thanks! I'm so sorry I didn't see this review until just now, but it's appreciated. And yeah, it does sound like a gross situation to be in.
Date: October 15, 2011 07:38 pm Title: "Mark"
I remember this one when you posted it! Poor McFarlane, bet he was totally shocked when that anamoly rocked his world...and not in a good way! Excellent use of a briefly mentioned character and what happened to him from the episode.
Date: October 15, 2011 07:21 pm Title: "Copper"
ooo, this one gives shivers, with the taste on the tongue, like what happens when you bite down on aluminum that was stuck on some food or gum. ZING!
The double meaning of copper here is great; tea pot and coins to blood and death.
Date: October 15, 2011 07:00 pm Title: "Smoke"
I know i have mentioned this, however, you have a wonderful grasp of scene writing, putting the reader into the story as if watching is on screen. T'Pol moving to the com, Trip, Travis and Archer stumbling out and leaning against the stairs....excellent descriptions!
Date: October 15, 2011 06:55 pm Title: "Bliss"
Well, of course, but then one wants that massage, kiss, wine and chocolate, maybe not in that order, but much appreciated just the same!
Great drabble with those changing circumstances making that shower sublime!
Date: October 15, 2011 06:52 pm Title: "Clinging"
Ah, those tempermental Chefs!! This one makes me laugh every time I read it. Glad I FINALLY found the way to write reviews here, rather than in the forum only.
And I don't know six languages, however, my cling wrap has made me cuss just the same!