Date: October 25, 2011 08:11 pm Title: Objects Are Much Closer Than They Appear
And thus cometh the fluffy part :-)
Nice trick with the opening scene - L/K piled in a heap below a console. One can't fault Erika for jumping to conclusions.The opening banter between the four is hilarious and the way they tell Lorian about the engagement is a wonderful piece of verbal art.
My reaction is the same as Lorians, every time I read it - I get wet eyes every time. It's chapters like these, which makes this THE classic piece of ENT fanficton in my opinion. Not too many authors dare to write fluffy-ish chapters and even fewer get it right. But you did. :-)