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Reviewer: Kotik Signed [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2011 08:11 pm Title: Objects Are Much Closer Than They Appear

And thus cometh the fluffy part :-)

Nice trick with the opening scene - L/K piled in a heap below a console. One can't fault Erika for jumping to conclusions.The opening banter between the four is hilarious and the way they tell Lorian about the engagement is a wonderful piece of verbal art.

My reaction is the same as Lorians, every time I read it - I get wet eyes every time. It's chapters like these, which makes this THE classic piece of ENT fanficton in my opinion. Not too many authors dare to write fluffy-ish chapters and even fewer get it right. But you did. :-)

Reviewer: Brandyjane Signed [Report This]
Date: July 22, 2011 02:36 am Title: The Cosmic Maxim Strikes Again

"Shut up! I'm ranting here!" Archer snapped. - Priceless!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I could totally see Bakula pulling off a scene like this.

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