Reviews For Anticipation
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Reviewer: tishkajaku Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Having been in this same situation way back when we were first trying to start a family, i must say you have captured the writhing emotions a hopeful parent will have when still in that unknown part of the process. Having it from father POV is perfect, especially since we get to see T'pol's stoic, and significant response. The yearning and fear and excitement are tangible.

I agree, we want a sequal!

Author's Response:

Maybe there'll be a sequel eventually. Rest assured, I see babies! I have a weakness for pregnant T'Pol. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2011 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1

You do such a great job being inside Trip's head. This is really sweet, and I'm glad this hoop jumping will be successful for them!

Author's Response:

Thanks! :-)

Reviewer: panyasan Signed [Report This]
Date: August 23, 2011 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Simple lovely. Just hoping third tme is a charm. Loved the line about T'Pol nodding and tracing her thumb back and forth over Trips wedding band.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review! I'm glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: crystalswolf Signed [Report This]
Date: November 25, 2010 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

This story is absolutely beautiful.  At the end, I definitely felt the "Anticipation" of Trip and T'Pol.  I have to say that I screamed the typical "No!" with my arms raised at the end, expecting more.  But that's just a sure sign of awesome storytelling.  Perfect ending.

Reviewer: Hummingbird2 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 21, 2010 07:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Very nice!

Reviewer: Lady Rainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: November 20, 2010 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Aw, c'mon, you've got me at the edge of my seat here! :-D


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