Date: October 07, 2011 03:57 pm Title: Broken Gods
I have read your SNW one, however did not know it was yours. i will reread and comment later.
As for this one, it is a most beautiful rendering of what Phlox and Archer had to endure to complete their respective missions for the greater good. But at what a tremendous cost.
You have given us a perfect look into their torment during this very tragic, very wrenching decision, and deepened the emotional impact of Similitude. yes, Broken Gods indeed, and not to be envied. Excellent!
Date: July 13, 2011 11:54 am Title: Broken Gods
This is just wonderful. One of my favorite stories of all time! Thank you for posting it. *wipes tears away*
You know how there are some stories you write that just grab you by the heart and never let go? "Broken Gods" is one of those stories for me. I am so emotionally attached to it. I started it because I love Sim, and by the time I finished it, I was totally in love with Phlox and Archer too.
Thank you so much for your comments.