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Date: June 07, 2016 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Kotik Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01, 2011 01:19 am Title: Chapter 2

No matter how often I re-read this chapter, I'm still getting all misty-eyed over the scene with the two T'Pol's. How Trip managed to watch that secretly, without being reduced to a sobbing wreck is a complete mystery to me.

Then we get to see the coming-together story again, this time the all-out editors cut from Lorian and Karyn. The way you managed to re-tell a story we already know without it being a rehash, while simultaneously turn in into a demonstration of the budding love between Kary and Lorian, is an utter stroke of genius. I'm contracting hyperglycemia here ;-)

And the end, that's just nectar and ambrosia for a true TnT shipper. Such a wonderful moment.



Author's Response:

I have insulin and tissues on demand if you need them, lol.

This follow-up to "Might-Have-Been," and all the stories that followed, would never have been written if not for the response I got from readers. Seriously. I poured everything I had into the last one, and I was emotionally wrung out, ready to hang up fanfiction for good. So consider this a big sparkling endorsement for the power of reader reviews. :D

Reviewer: Kotik Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31, 2011 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 1

That's an emotional rollercoaster if I ever saw one. The awe of meeting his lost offspring, then the pain of realizing that old T'Pol is dying, followed by the sweet scenes between Archer and Karyn only to fall back into the sad realisation that Trip watches a life he's not going to have.

Then there is the sickeningly sweet scene of how E2-TnT came together. I think I contracted diabetes over that one. No wonder that the E2 kids loved it.

Then it all comes crashing down into a darkness as old T'Pol passes away. One really could feel the awkwardness that old T'Pol predicted in the TV episode. The grief that consumes Lorian is very powerfully written.

It really is one helluva chapter. Sweet, dark in places and overall a very powerful experience.



Author's Response:

This story was a real turning point for me in terms of emotional depth, and the reader response just staggered me. As usual, I wrote it thinking it was the last one, and I had no more ENT storytelling left in me, but I think this was the point where the series and characters took on a life of their own and refused to let me stop.

Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2011 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Yes, TnT are indeed a fairy tale, aren't they? *insert big goofy grin here*

It also strikes me that, by Vulcan standards, T'Pol is having an affair with Trip, even though she's keeping herself physically chaste. And sometimes affairs of the heart are more intense and dangerous and exciting than the physical kind.

It's oh-so-nice to finally hear them say it.

Thank you for sharing this series here.



Author's Response:

My pleasure. :)

If Chapter 1 was me working through my grief over the derailing of T/T on the show, Chapter 2 was me making lemonade out of the lemons.

Interesting take on the T/T "affair." I did find a way around the idea that they were indulging in something morally incorrect, but the danger and excitement, hoo yeah. Especially when they want to, but can't. That was one thing that T'Plot Device -- er, Koss -- was good for...assuming one sees a happy ending somewhere down the road, which I certainly did.

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: July 11, 2011 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just gorgeously bittersweet. And I like the parallels: E2 T'Pol marries Trip because he can be an outlet for his emotions...and a dying E2 T'Pol ends up being an outlet for his. I like the symmetry.

I also like the change in T'Pol, from the denial she exhibited in the episode to the acceptance of Lorian she shows here...as well as acceptance of Trip's role in it all.



Author's Response:

"E2" showed us Trip and Lorian together, but not T'Pol (the younger) and Lorian. Even I skipped it when I wrote the first "Might-Have-Been" (Chapter 1 was originally a one-shot story) - the story was about grief and loss (which I was feeling at the time about Enterprise, since it was becoming clear that TPTB were bailing on the T/T relationship).

Writing the second part of the story gave me a chance to speculate about how T'Pol and Lorian might relate to each other. At the end of "E2," she seemed truly regretful that she hadn't accepted him when she had the chance, so it seemed natural that she would, if he came back.

Thank you for all your comments!

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