Date: August 18, 2013 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for a terrific story! I'm a little concerned about next year, though. What can Phlox possibly do that he didn't do this year? Oh, and I hope he remembers to reformulate Porthos' doggie food. We don't want the little guy to become a social outcatst.
Date: June 30, 2011 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, Phlox deserves the treat after what he's had to go through, thanks to the senior staff! Talk about dragging your feet for a medical physical! The characterizations were spot-on, as well as Phlox's methods to get the job done. I love how Trip was convinced with 'logic', and Malcolm by somewhat-emotional blackmail (or is it holding the pineapple hostage?).
"I'm not going to give you your allergy shot until you do something for me."
A crafty look came into Reed's eyes. "Who do you want me to kill?"
Why did I just have a vision of MU Phlox and Major Reed?
Great job, Kathy.
Thanks, Lady Rainbow! Could be they are channeling their MU selves, but I can hear Malcolm saying that line sarcastically and someone else might think he's serious. :)
Date: June 29, 2011 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love this. Phlox's POV on the various crewmembers is spot on, as is their behavior! Nicely done!
Thanks, Honeybee. I love writing Phlox as the main character, because he has such a unique POV.