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Reviewer: Dinah Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2013 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a terrific story! I'm a little concerned about next year, though. What can Phlox possibly do that he didn't do this year? Oh, and I hope he remembers to reformulate Porthos' doggie food. We don't want the little guy to become a social outcatst.

Reviewer: Eireann Signed [Report This]
Date: September 08, 2012 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Go, Phlox!  They haven't a chance against your cunning!  :D

Reviewer: Lady Rainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2011 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yeah, Phlox deserves the treat after what he's had to go through, thanks to the senior staff! Talk about dragging your feet for a medical physical! The characterizations were spot-on, as well as Phlox's methods to get the job done. I love how Trip was convinced with 'logic', and Malcolm by somewhat-emotional blackmail (or is it holding the pineapple hostage?).

"I'm not going to give you your allergy shot until you do something for me."

A crafty look came into Reed's eyes. "Who do you want me to kill?"

Why did I just have a vision of MU Phlox and Major Reed?

Great job, Kathy.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Lady Rainbow! Could be they are channeling their MU selves, but I can hear Malcolm saying that line sarcastically and someone else might think he's serious. :)

Reviewer: Brandyjane Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2011 07:07 am Title: Chapter 1

This whole exchange cracked me up:

"I'm not going to give you your allergy shot until you do something for me."

A crafty look came into Reed's eyes. "Who do you want me to kill?"



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: Hummingbird2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2011 06:10 am Title: Chapter 1

Terrific, thanks!



Author's Response:

You're welcome!

Reviewer: Artisticmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30, 2011 03:47 am Title: Chapter 1

You never fail to deliver a fabulous story! Excellent, and I enjoyed how Phlox went head to head with each of the senior crew!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Artisticmom!

 

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29, 2011 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I love this. Phlox's POV on the various crewmembers is spot on, as is their behavior! Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Honeybee. I love writing Phlox as the main character, because he has such a unique POV.

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