Date: June 27, 2011 06:42 am Title: Chapter 1
LOL! That was great! It's literally been decades since I've seen the Monkees, but this brought it all back: The crazy antics, they way they interacted with each other, the predicaments that they would find themselves in. Absolutely wonderful!
Clever idea, too, for why Archer, Tucker and T'Pol had to restore the timeline.
I haven't laughed so much while reading a story in a long time. Thank you for writing this.
I'm especially proud that you think I nailed the tone of the show, as I was a huge fan in my youth. I worked hard to evoke the surreal nature of the show. Thank you for reading and enjoying.
Date: June 24, 2011 07:10 am Title: Chapter 1
The pacing and the jokes were great! You didn't just write a crossover story--I like that you included a song and some surreal "dream sequence" parts, just like the show. The best part for me though, as a die-hard Monkees fan: the Monkees often mocked the entertainment industry, and even themselves once they got more creative control and actively tried to blow away that "manufactured band" stigma. That you have AT&T likewise mocking Star Trek is just brilliant!
Very glad you found it funny, amiga.:)
Date: June 24, 2011 06:34 am Title: Chapter 1
Holy cow, ME. That was perfect. I felt exactly like I was sitting in front of the TV watching an episode of my beloved Monkees. All the banter and quick cuts were dead on. A,T&T watching the pilot of Star Trek was priceless. I am humbled by your greatness!
I was a huge fan of the show back in the day, so it was fun to recreate the tone. I'm glad you appreciated them watching trek.
Date: June 24, 2011 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh. My. God.
*bows to Mistress Euclid's greatness*
"Who writes this stuff, anyway?" XD XD XD
This is brilliant, ME.
Coming from such a wonderful writer, I humbly accept the compliment! Thank you!