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Reviewer: jlgg Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07, 2016 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: Jamieson Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01, 2013 11:03 am Title: Chapter 1

This was beautifully written. I was always a little annoyed that we never got to see a proper reaction to the unanswered fate of Lorian from T'Pol (I don't count that end scene with Archer - she came across as not having fully digested the event), or any reaction at all from Trip, and that the rather significant events from this episode never came up again, especially later on with Elizabeth. This story provides a much more satisfying and poignant ending to episode. I also like that it was from Archer's point of view - it makes for a quieter, more serene feel to the story that allows the observation of their interaction with each other to speak for itself. Excellent :-)



Author's Response:

Oh thank you so much. I'm sort of obessed with the idea of TnT and their children, especially what Lorian would have been like had he lived in the canonical timeline. This was very enjoyable to write, and I'm so glad you appreciate it!

Reviewer: tishkajaku Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15, 2011 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is so beautifully sad. While the pain is hard to see, I am gratified Trip and T'Pol are letting their love comfort each other, rather than go it alone, as they so often do.

But then Jonathan, still solitary in his own pain, must walk away, and suffer in silence. So stoic, strong.....a perfectly broken Captain.

Will we get to read of his 'rescue' soon?



Author's Response:

Oh my! Now you've intriqued me - I should write that rescue, shouldn't I? This was of course a one off, but I'm so glad you responded so well. Thanks. Maybe a sequel will materialize. ;)

Reviewer: crystalswolf Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13, 2011 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1

I love Archer's perspective and how he has that small bit of jealousy he can't help but have. Then to have everything "settled" for him in a way after quietly listening to them interact.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this little vignette. *hugs* I especially needed some kind words today. 

Reviewer: Lady Rainbow Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2011 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1

Ow. Poor Jon. :-(

I love the line "The opposite of love was not hate, after all. It was indifference, and those two had never been indifferent to one another." That's very true.

A powerful short story. Thanks, Honeybee. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed. I think it the right thing to just keep it this one scene!

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: June 18, 2011 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this. I feel just as bad for Jon as I do TnT, because he has to face a missed opportunity along with feeling badly for his friends. Great job!



Author's Response:

Thanks! And thanks for the beta. It's a complicated dynamic here, and that's fun to play with. Sympathetic Jon is an interesting Jon!

Reviewer: Mistress Euclid Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 1

Now, you know how I would resolve Jon's sadness here! ;) But this is just lovely, and it shows how much Jon loves them both, and how much TnT love each other. Very powerful.



Author's Response:

Thanks, amiga. 

Reviewer: atlantisflygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16, 2011 12:56 am Title: Chapter 1

this is beautiful :) I feel for all of them, especially Jon!



Author's Response:

I know, I always sympathize with Jon. It can't be easy to watch your two closest friends enter into a huge-deal romance, right? 

Reviewer: panyasan Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15, 2011 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was a brilliant TnT moment seen from Archer POV. I love your line about the opposite of love isn't hate, but indifference. Very true.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

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