Reviews For Just To Sleep
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Reviewer: asearcher Signed [Report This]
Date: September 26, 2011 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

Ahh...very sweet.

Reviewer: panyasan Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15, 2011 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1

Very charming. I liked that you made the relationship between Hoshi and Jon so natural and good for both of them. Loved the last line; that Hoshi just snuck into his quarters to sleep and Jon is loving it. 

Reviewer: Aquarius Signed [Report This]
Date: June 19, 2011 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1

I know I already commented on this at Livejournal, but I just wanted to thank you for archiving it here. There is always need for more Jon/Hoshi. :-) Glad you added this to our library.



Author's Response:

Thank you all for being so welcoming!

Reviewer: kayjayuu Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12, 2011 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1

Bigger bed has its advantages, heh. Nice piece.

Was a bit confused about Hoshi being on her stomach but her knee cocked up. Maybe I'm not reading it right?



Author's Response:

Hmm...she's on her stomach with her knee drawn in the direction of her chest/head.  I can see where "up" could also mean ceiling, though and yeah, that would be confusing.  My apologies!

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Artisticmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 11, 2011 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1

How sweet! Everyone needs some fluff now and then! Very nice. I look forward to reading more of your work.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I really appreciate that you took the time to read it.

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 10, 2011 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awww…I'm so glad you decided to archive this. It may be fluff, but it's romantic fluff. Good job!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouragement!

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