Date: June 19, 2011 01:47 am Title: Chapter 1
I know I already commented on this at Livejournal, but I just wanted to thank you for archiving it here. There is always need for more Jon/Hoshi. :-) Glad you added this to our library.
Thank you all for being so welcoming!
Date: June 12, 2011 08:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Bigger bed has its advantages, heh. Nice piece.
Was a bit confused about Hoshi being on her stomach but her knee cocked up. Maybe I'm not reading it right?
Hmm...she's on her stomach with her knee drawn in the direction of her chest/head. I can see where "up" could also mean ceiling, though and yeah, that would be confusing. My apologies!
Thanks for reading!