Date: September 17, 2013 06:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I should be writing instead of reading this stuff. But when it's this good ... How do you manage to write so much in so few words? I wish I could!
Needless to say, I am a big A/T lover, and I love how you've written The Boys so well.
Very good and very enjoyable!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks for reading.
Date: December 15, 2011 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Congratulations, hon, I finally managed to read my first slash -- and an NC-17 one at that! But that's just because this was so wonderfully written. The language about the good and bad kinds of wrong rang incredibly true and really did a great job of capturing the newness/oddness you've mentioned in other review responses. Plus, the ending sentence made me laugh. Ain't it the truth!
Thanks so much for writing this.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so much, lfvoy. I appreciate the feedback. I wasn't much of a slash reader before Enterprise, and this wags my first slash story that wasn't a drabble. I'm glad that writing the kind of slash story I was interested in as a beginner also resonated with others. Thanks for the review.
Date: August 30, 2011 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, man. That was fracking hot! I love how you used Jon's tanline. Smexy!!
Author's Response:
Yes, the way those tan lines can drive us to distraciton is positively insidious! Thanks for reading.
Date: June 12, 2011 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Seems natural that after their brush with death could come a moment of intimacy -- I'm sure they'd had plenty of other opportunities during their friendship, such as the mention of their training in Australia, but dangers on Earth are a little different from dangers on another planet!
Nice observation that Jon wouldn't expect anything in return. He does tend to give of himself a lot. And fairly expected that Trip would do it anyway.
My favorite Archer/Tucker moments come from that episode.
Date: May 23, 2011 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, wow, wow! :-D
Date: May 22, 2011 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Quite a wonderfully logical hit you between the eyes type of story. Nice the guys are going to figure it out. Good story.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! Glad it turned out not half bad, for something I only did just to see if I could. ;-)
Date: May 22, 2011 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice. I already told you why I like this but it now has added layers. This was just so sweet. Two men with so much sexual experience between them, now finding themselves in the position of virgins. I could just eat Trip up. You really convey his sense of wonder at having these feelings for his captain and best friend. I think they will figure it out.
I'm so glad you liked this reboot, bt. Tell you a secret? Even though it's so short, it was really hard to do, which is why I think it came out in two incarnations. There had to be a "wrongness"...but I didn't want that to come from two men being together...but at the same time, the fact is that these two canonically straight characters are coming together, so I coudn't ignore the newness/strangeness of the male/male thing. Truth be told I envy the people who write slash all the time and know how to ride that line without crossing it, while writing the characters convincingly. Any way, I'm glad it worked for you. <3
Author's Response:
Date: May 22, 2011 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
*genuflects*
OMG! I bow to your awesomeness, Aquarius! Love it! Thank you sooooooo much for sharing this wonderful beginning between Jon and Trip!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I wanted to see if I could show the love without making them sound all girly and stuff.
Date: May 22, 2011 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sometimes less is more. Sometimes more is MORE! Thank you so much for expanding this. Beautiful, intimate and erotic!
Author's Response:
Thanks, sugar. This has been on my mind for some time, as you know. I thought it was okay in the non-explicit one, but you know me. I always have the devil on my shoulder telling me to make things dirtier!
Date: May 22, 2011 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
*Fans Self* Wow. You certainly made it hotter. Amazing work! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad you liked.