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Reviewer: tishkajaku Signed [Report This]
Date: October 07, 2011 04:49 pm Title: Prologue

you have GOT to give more! This is an amazing story, the way you have all these aspects of our Trek world, and in keeping with the history timeline as well. I love the way in both crews, Trip and Tpol end up together, and he is protecting her in the doubly alien place, from her perspective. Plus adding Q and the Guardian = GENIUS!

I love it that we must let both Reeds live, as yes, he iS cute!

Brilliant beginning, my hat's off to you!



Author's Response:

Aww. :D Thank you! I've been VERY bad about getting another chapter of this out there, but rest assured I've been working on this story. Unfortunately, I've been working on it as a whole which means I have more of the ending written out than I do part of the next chapter! I've made a promise to myself that I'll get that next chapter out before October ends.

Reviewer: bluetiger Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2011 06:18 am Title: Prologue

Wow, what a begining. A contest between the RU and MU crews! This should be very interesting. I hope you are able to continue soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm planning on getting a lot more done this weekend and next so, if all goes well, the first chapter should be coming very soon.

Reviewer: Alelou Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2011 06:42 am Title: Prologue

Wow, this is so rich!  You made it sound like this little nothing of a prologue, mais mon dieu, quelle intrigue!  Second, it's hysterical. For whatever reason, I chuckled out loud the loudest at this one: "I like Beyoncé."  Snort!  Also delighted by the TnT potential.  Woo hoo!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! This means a lot, since I really admire your way with words in your TnT Missing Scenes series. Rest assured, I definitely have plans for them in this one. *rubs hands and laughs evilly*.

Thanks so much for taking the time to review, especially when I owe you probably a half-dozen or more in kind. :)

 

Reviewer: Dinah Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24, 2011 04:55 am Title: Prologue

What an absolutely marvelous start!  I'm hooked!  The dialogue, the details, the characterizations -- everything is spot on.  I'm looking forward to reading more.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :) Thank you especially for the comment on characterizations - that's something that most concerned me when I first started writing fanfic, especially reagrding Captain Archer. I feel so much more comfortable with all of these character's voices now.

Reviewer: Destinye Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2011 06:26 am Title: Prologue

Oh, wow. This is just brilliant. Great beginning, and can't wait to see what path this follows. I'll defonatly be sticking around.



Author's Response:

Thanks Destinye! Hopefully you won't have too long to wait before the next chapter is out.

Reviewer: Honeybee Signed [Report This]
Date: April 23, 2011 06:12 am Title: Prologue

Completely awesome beginning. I can't wait to see where you take it, and I'm especially intriqued by the fate of MU TnT in this one. Oh, and poor Captain Archer. Terrific beginning.



Author's Response:

Thank you! And thanks for setting up the challenge in the first place. This is proving to be the most fun I've had in writing a piece of fanfic since I started with "Fear Not".

 

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