Date: September 09, 2012 11:54 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh My God.
This story was so horrible it's taken me several attempts to read it. It just gave me the creeps so badly I kept loggingo out of it. However, this time I said I was going to get to the end and I have. Well worth it too, however ghastly the trip was (yes, that was a pun, but it works both ways!)
This really is totally believable and your writing is first class. It really did give me the horrors, probably because you draw the picture so brilliantly it's like actually being there. You avoid the 'cosy' comfort of making everyone we care about proof against the madness (Captain Archer's weak spot is poor Porthos, and this is the first story I've read that dares to use the poor dog in that way) -and Phlox's fate still hangs in the balance as the story closes. Even Malcolm is failing.
And as for the ending - *shudder!!!*
Date: April 09, 2011 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 17
I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing this Kathy Rose. Things were complicated for me while you have been posting. However I wanted to say that I read this years ago and thought it was brilliant and very intense. What a horrible and complicated situation for the crew. Such a unique and twisted plot. I just wanted to say that, this time, as with last time, your ending gave me the cold shivers.
Thank you, bluetiger. It's awesome that you liked it well enough that you read again it this go-round. This is one of those stories that, while the ending might not have been what a reader expected (all warm and fuzzy, for example), it did evoke a response. I'm glad you mentioned that it gave you cold shivers, because it lets me know the story was effective. Thanks!
Date: March 26, 2011 10:40 am Title: Chapter 17
Oh my goodness, this was an exiting ride. A big ouch from the TnT camp that poor Trip gets dumped, but he got dumped in season 4 - so I'll just use my imagination to give myself hope. ;) But seriously, this was an amazing ride and very true to all the characters, and I really enjoyed Crazy Malcolm and Evil Trip! Great job.
I'm so glad you liked it! And I'm also glad you held on for the whole ride. Thanks!
Date: March 20, 2011 08:29 am Title: Chapter 15
I get the feeling Hoshi is one one who is losing it. Is everything something she imagined? Is she going to shoot Trip? Aaa.. the suspense...
Bwa-ha-ha-ha-ha! Keep reading, and you'll find out. *rubs hands together*
Date: March 20, 2011 07:06 am Title: Chapter 15
Just got caught up with this.
Oh, boy. Is Hoshi going nuts? Is T'Pol? Are they all going to go nuts before they're saved?
This is a gripping story, Kathy Rose. Awaiting the next chappie!
In answer to all your questions. Lady Rainbow... you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for reading.
Date: March 19, 2011 05:58 am Title: Chapter 14
Very spooky. So, now it's either reset button or Trip's not going to die. But this is very tense.
You know, I can't really tell you, because it would spoil the rest of the story. :) But I hope there's a surprise coming that you don't anticipate. Thanks, Honeybee, for your consistent reviews, and I'm glad I'm able to keep you coming back to read the next chapter.
Date: March 14, 2011 08:43 am Title: Chapter 9
Seeing as I've only just got myself into Reed/Sato, I'd never read this before, so I'm enjoying it very much as you post it here. The suspense is, in fact, killing me.
Glad to hear you're enjoying this, Mr Smith. I hope I don't disappoint you. And I am definitely going for the suspense aspect.
Date: March 13, 2011 07:05 am Title: Chapter 8
Oooooh…it seems to me everyone is a little crazy, even Hoshi. I wonder who is next. I hope it is not Trip, since I have a soft spot for evil Trip.
That's the thing... who's crazy and who isn't? That's what made this such a fun story to write. Thank you for commenting again, Honeybee.