Date: February 12, 2011 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my. I'm seriously going to have my head stuck in this tomorrow. But, Tomorrow it will be as I need a good sleep. This is great as it is right now, and each part is seriously grabbing enough to make me need to read the rest of it. It's great work, as always :3
Date: February 10, 2011 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, Ladyrainbow, that was an awesome adventure! You really matched the charcters well with their counterparts (for want of a better word). The action was great, I especially liked the part where Hoshi was having her flashbacks, and it was nice to see that history didn't repeat itself.
The ending (with Daniles) almost gives leave for another story with the good guys battling it out with Future Guy again! That'd be cool! :)