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Reviewer: Verse Ranger Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09, 2014 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

I have to admit that I've been putting off reading this one because I found this episode difficult to watch for various reasons.  I think this story really pulled the threads of the orignal story together and made it much better.  You did a great job of keeping all the players in charactor and it all just felt 'right' reading it.  Thanks for taking the time to write it.

Reviewer: lfvoy Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05, 2011 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1

This one's definitely one of my favorites, and you've wonderfully captured the atmosphere of desperate hope of the episode itself (which, being a huge BSG fan, was very obvious to me from the beginning) yet handled some of the awkwardness that even showed up on-screen due to the sudden Archer/T'Pol sort-of-relationship.  This addition makes the episode make *sense* in a way the screen story alone doesn't.

Thank you so much for writing it.



Author's Response:

I've heard that Mike Sussman wrote the episode after reading Ron Moore's still unproduced BSG mini-series script, with Ron Moore's blessing. it's definitely a BSG homage, and I'm glad you think I captured that.

Thank you so much for enjoying it, and I am very touched that it enhanced the episode for you.

Reviewer: Escriba Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31, 2011 06:49 am Title: Epilogue

You know I really love this story of yours. I think this is the only *hopeful* story settled in the Twilight universe that I know of.

And the epilogue is just perfect, because it shows us that T'Mir exists and that her parents just need to... *create* her in the future.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hadn't planned on the epilogue, but T'Mir just was such a strong willed character she just had to tell her mother that she needs to exist. I'm going to have to write the story where they conceive her in the RU, a prequel to "The Little Miracle" which shows that she does exist in the regular timeline. Thank you again! 

Reviewer: crystalswolf Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27, 2011 07:16 pm Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed rereading this story and that thin thread of hope even as grim as their futures had become.  Powerful, emotional, awesome.  One of my favorites of all time!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I don't really do angst, so this story was a huge challenge. I'm glad you like it. And it reminds me I need to get around to writing the RU timeline hinted at in the epilogue. 

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