Date: July 18, 2011 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
>> "They weren't checking us out?" Trip asked. <<
I daresay Trip seemed a bit disappointed. ;)
This is adorable. A very fun read.
Thanks for the review. I' m glad you liked the story.
Trip said a few things throughout the show that indicated he would be disappointed at learning the truth about that.
Date: January 05, 2011 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This totally caught me by surprise. I guess I just couldn't imagine the women of the ship NOT being interested in the tan lines of our guys. So, your twist was really effective in my case! Very funny and creative story.
Thanks for the review. I'm glad the twist was effective. I'm glad you liked it. The women of Enterpise may well have been interested, but that's not what the was on the grapevine (at least at that point in time.)
Date: January 05, 2011 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is really funny! No wonder Trip was so eager to prove himself on Risa. Personally, I know I would have been checking out those two. That's for certain!
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed it. As to the checking out...that's a given. ;^)