Date: January 02, 2012 03:01 am Title: Chapter 4
You have written a very real, in character story for Jon, Trip, and T'Pol. It paces perfectly, and I love the peripheral tie ins to other episodes (Krios Prime, Xindi weapon w/Romulans.) The emotional collateral damage just draws you into their hearts, and waiting for the next chapter is difficult!
Thank you, Tish! I'm so glad you have been enjoying this story! I'm humbled, and quite speechless, with all the positive feedback!
Date: January 01, 2012 12:18 am Title: Chapter 4
You know, I normally don't review stories I have beta'd, but this story is so exceptional that I have to. From the very beginning, it captured and held my attention, so much so that I had to remind myself that I was supposed to be betaing, not just reading! What particularly struck me was the deft handling of the complications of the relationships.
And awesome work with the flashbacks, pauline! They work wonderfully to describe not only what has happened, but how the characters feel.
*blushes* Thank you, Kathy Rose!
I have to say, folks, that KR did an amazing job in helping me pull this story together. If it wasn't for her helping me fill in the blanks, I don't think it would have turned out as well as it did. I am truly greatful! *hugs*
Date: December 31, 2011 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Amazing, amazing and more amazing! My heart is truly heartbreaking for all three of them. I do hope they work things out so that all love flourishes!
Thank you, Mistress. I'm really happy that you have been enjoying my little story! I'll guess you'll have to wait and see how it all turns out.
Date: December 31, 2011 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love, love, love this, pauline. What a wonderful scenario. To have Jon and Trip lose their inhabitions and act on their love. Then to have Trip remember his love for T'Pol.
This is a fabulous story and I can't wait to see what happens next. You really give us an insight into their confusion and heartache.
I am so glad you got this assignment. You have a flair with the love scenes. Both Jon/Trip and Trip/T'pol are hot as all get out. Dare I hope we will see a threesome?
*blushes* Thank you, BT! I was actually very excited to get Aquarius! Mind you, it took me a while to settle on an outline, but once I did, the story almost wrote itself.
I have to say that writing the love scenes can be very difficult for me, however, in this case they came relatively easy! Hmm... maybe I can prod for some artistic impressions once the last chapter is released! *bats doe eyes* :)
Date: December 31, 2011 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is so complicated! Poor everyone! I really can't wait to see how it all works out--but I guess I'm going to have to! Oh, the agony of anticipation!!
This is really good so far. This is certainly not a run-of-the-mill simplistic triangle!
Thank you, hon! I'm really glad, and relieved, that you are enjoying your Christmas fic! Hopefully not too much longer, and you will learn how it all works out.
Date: December 31, 2011 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 4
Aquarius wanted a love triangle, and honey you gave her one! I think T'Pol is so in character here. She clearly loves Trip enough to let him go, though she doesn't want to. Amazing work. And I like that Phlox is so blunt about these being real feelings between Jon and Trip. Great stuff.
Do you hear the song 'You are torn between to lovers. Feeling like a fool. Loving both of us is breaking all the rules." (I added the 'you') Mwahahahahah...
Serioulsy, thank you, Honeybee! I'm glad you're enjoying this, and it's good to know that I've hit the right spot, and the right voice, with this story.