Date: September 12, 2011 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think that episode of SGA really fits Malcolm,but Malcolm seems a lot more 'with it' than McKay was! :-p And how his mind conjures up Trip to help with his thought processes is awesome. Poor whumped Malcolm!
Looking forward to the next chappie!
I thought so too, Lady Rainbow. Malcolm's much more stoic than perpetually wound-up Rodney!
Date: September 04, 2011 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow, S69, this is a great view into Malcolm's mind, tying in his loyalty, frustrations, regrets and fears with his Enterprise family. The fact that he is in Shuttlepod One, withut Trip this time, and in trouble, near an ocean no less, our Malcolm will need to draw on his stoic inner strength. Great episode!
I'm glad you thought so. I really wanted to get into Malcolm's head for this one since I thought that the officer of this time, with two wars (Xindi and the ongoing Romulan one) and so many years of service behind him, might be a little more worn, but assured, a little wiser based on having had experience with X, Y and Z situations before but also more emotionally (and thus vunerably) attached to his Enterprise family.
Date: September 04, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Malcolm! Very suspenseful stuff here. Great beginning.
Thank you Mistress E! I can't claim all the credit for the suspense of the plotline, since the original SGA episode it's based on is fantastic by itself, but I hope I've made this version uniquely Malcolm's and very Enterprise.
Date: July 21, 2011 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG! What a great beginning. It's about time we get the Tucker/Reed thing cooking here. Please don't wait too long for another chapter! Poor Malcolm! Poor us!!
Thank you so much! Poor Malcolm indeed. It's about to get much worse. :) Chapter three is almost done, so I promise not to make everyone wait for the rest of the story too long.
Date: July 12, 2011 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
An exciting start! So glad you posted this here. I can't wait for Trip and Malcolm to be reunited.
Whoops, looks I didn't set my preferences to get email notices of my reviews. I was suprised to find some here! Thank you so much for the encouragement. Now that I have two chapters out there, I'm eager too! :)