Date: May 19, 2012 02:46 am Title: Chapter 4
I think that was one of the most tense rescues I've ever read! And what a painful confession for Malcolm -- ouch! Poor guy.
Thank you! For some reason this was the hardest chapter to write, perhaps because of all that tension. I really wanted his confession to carry a sense of burdens he placed on himself because of his character and his sense of honor, duty and loyalty.
Date: November 17, 2011 12:43 am Title: Chapter 4
Excellent added story for The Good That Men Do....so poignant and moving, Malcolm's lost heart. No wonder Trip came to him when he was so alone. I love this story! Tish
"Malcolm's lost heart ..." I love that as a description of Malcolm in this situation. Thank you.
Date: November 02, 2011 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is such a tense chapter! I actually had a hard time reading it, because you make me feel his jeopardy and desperation. Great work!
Yoda voice: "Yes, the angst is strong in this one." :) I found myself a bit wound up while I was writing this chapter! In truth, this one chapter took so very long to get just right. Every sentance was like pulling teeth, trying to get that feeling of desperation and then honesty with one's self wihtout losing the pace of the action too.
Thanks for the review. It pleases me to know it had such an effect. :)