Date: September 04, 2011 09:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
YES! Malcolm needs Trip and as I mentioned, being in that shuttlepod, makes perfect sense. Plus all the engineering needs to be met.
i am looking forward to the next chapter.....we must get Malcolm OUT of that water!
Yes! We must, but how ... :-D
Date: September 04, 2011 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, my! Just very sorrowful. Malcolm's need for Trip, on many levels, is apparent here. Excellent work!
I'm so pleased you think so! I know this story is angst, but I didn't want to turn up the dial to maudlin or, for that matter, diminish it too much out of concern that it wouldn't be happy or sastifying enough.
Date: September 02, 2011 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love this. Poor Malcolm. It's like the Ghost of Christmas Trip or something LOL. And the underwear starting to materialize...*fans self*
Bwahahaha! "The Ghost of Christmas Trip", I love that! I was trying to make Hallucination!Trip a little "off" - not exactly out-of-character, but a little less animated than the real Trip would be - and more obviously a figment of Malcolm's imagination for the reader, so that desction fits rather well.
I've decided that's the superpower I want to have: to be able to just think the clothing away. >:-)
Date: September 01, 2011 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
That was one of my favorite episodes of Stargate Atlantis. I love your concept of Malcolm cojuring up what he needs to stay calm in this emergency. I am really enjoying this and hope you can add to it soon.
It was one of my favorite episodes too and it seemed like such a natural fit for Malcolm. Next chapter coming up soon!
Date: September 01, 2011 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I so feel for Malcolm here. His mind conjuring the person he most wants to see - it's heartbreaking. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Thanks again! It's about to get worse for poor Malcolm before it gets any better.